Feedback on Evaluation Task Two -The Campaign

I feel that your presentation covers many of the core points but also has absent detail to the arguments that you want to make in particular in relation to the star image and branding in the campaign. Also you need to discuss the campaign in relation to its marketing mix. The evaluation should include how successful you think you were and give some indication of product placement. I was expecting the presentation to be a minimum of 12 slides. Can you redraft and complete your work by next Wednesday.

Thank you